Nitro Pikmin
Fiery Blowhog
Ultra's evil brother, Nitro! MWAHAHA!
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Post by Nitro Pikmin on Oct 29, 2009 18:50:28 GMT -5
The Bulborb Rebellion Location: Perplexing Pool, near Shower Room, on the shower tiles and in the beach. General: Fang Day:0 Troops Ordinary: 15 Ravenous Dwarf Bulborbs(Blueish green color, can swim through deep water fast, intense biting damage to opponent) 20 Dwarf Green Bulborbs(Can camouflouge somewhat well, are green, and are fast compared to a Red Spotty Dwarf Bulborb) 15 Dwarf Snowy Bulborbs(Dwarf Snowy Bulborb, can tread through snow and hide in snow very well, faster then most bulborbs, furry on its back making it appear to be fluffy like snow) Special: 3 Hyper Bulborb(Light Green Color, hyperactive, very fast. takes big bites with it's large fangs) 2 Ultra Bulborb(A bulborb with large claws for digging to dodge attacks and attack better) Elite: None Ammo: None Buildings: Weapon Storage Resource Storage Ammo Storage Barracks Base Defences: 2 Water Cannons (Shoots water at enemies) (If can't withstand water, hurts the enemies more than others that can withstand it) Resources: 700 Iron 130 Petals Projects: 1.Build Troop Healing Center(0/20 days)(300 Iron) 2. Develop Bulborb infection (0/25 days) 3. Develop Element Upgrade (0/40 days) (Makes troops withstand fire, electricity, work faster in water, withstand poison, less damage taken from things crushing troops) Log:
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Waffle-SS
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Post by Waffle-SS on Oct 29, 2009 18:59:20 GMT -5
Your Troop Healing center could probably use slightly less Iron. Also, your Element upgrade will be weak unless you put more days into it. Finally, emember that you lose two petals per project day. You'd be down 150 petals.
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Bread & Butter
Fiery Bulblax
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Post by Bread & Butter on Oct 29, 2009 19:11:20 GMT -5
Holy crap I just realized that that pikmin has two arms... Yeah do what Waffle says and you should be good. However I'm not so sure about your Green Bulborbs. Usually dwarf go into the ordinary troops and the non-dwarf are special. If they're both in the same category then your green are probably going to be about as strong as any regular dwarf and the green dwarf are going to be even weaker than that. Everything is relative to everything else in the category. i.e. 10 Green Bulborbs will be about as strong as 10 dwarf snowy. So if you want green to be on the same level as an other bulborb then you should bring them up to special, however if you do that you have to change all your troops around since the max is 50 and 5 for applications. However if you just wanted green ones with a smaller form that is just as strong, agile, everything then by all means keep that there. Just be aware of how much weaker they will be compared to other bulborbs. I also noticed that your snowy are in ordinary. Most people would put those in the special category so your snowy will be significantly weaker than an enemy's.
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Nitro Pikmin
Fiery Blowhog
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Post by Nitro Pikmin on Oct 29, 2009 20:21:19 GMT -5
Now is it good? I modified the petal amount, the amount of troops, troop categories, and the amount of iron needed to make the Health Center.
I'd still have 10 petals after the 40 days are up and I have the Elemental Upgrade.
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Post by tinfoilman on Oct 29, 2009 20:44:10 GMT -5
You start with 50 Ordinary troops and 5 Special troops.
EDIT: Oh, and you can't have a base in a cave. "Near the Shower Room", however, is perfectly fine, as long as that area isn't already claimed by someone else (I doubt that it is).
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Nitro Pikmin
Fiery Blowhog
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Post by Nitro Pikmin on Oct 29, 2009 20:48:26 GMT -5
Yeah, sorry I didn't realize that at first. I'll fix that right now.
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Bread & Butter
Fiery Bulblax
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Post by Bread & Butter on Oct 29, 2009 20:51:37 GMT -5
Yeah, sorry for confusing you. I was just stating that if you wanted all your troops to be as strong as everyone's you had to change some things, however you can't just bring all 10 over to the special since you're only allowed 5 Special and 50 Ordinary... guess I didn't explain that one well...
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Nitro Pikmin
Fiery Blowhog
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Post by Nitro Pikmin on Oct 29, 2009 20:53:35 GMT -5
It's alright, I think I fixed everything anyway. Did I?
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Bread & Butter
Fiery Bulblax
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Post by Bread & Butter on Oct 29, 2009 20:55:17 GMT -5
You're allowed 50 ordinaries and you have 45 so unless u want to start with less....
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Nitro Pikmin
Fiery Blowhog
Ultra's evil brother, Nitro! MWAHAHA!
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Post by Nitro Pikmin on Oct 29, 2009 21:09:02 GMT -5
Okay, I fixed it.
Also, I added a picture of General Fang
Am I approved?
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Post by tinfoilman on Oct 30, 2009 14:33:52 GMT -5
You should only have 130 Petals remaining, you should have 700 Iron remaining (and, it only costs around 100 iron for a small building, but its your choice), and you need a log (I think, though it may not be necessary).
APPROVED.
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