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Post by PhilTH on Oct 25, 2009 15:13:12 GMT -5
(My armies always have funny names.)
Location: Near the White Flower Garden
General: General Phil Phoperous (Red Pikmin)
Petals: 48
Troops:-
Ordinary:
25 Red Pikmin (Strong attackers, immune to fire, and red)
25 White Pikimin ( Fast, poisonous, and they can dig)
Special:
5 Breadbugs (Ground transportation units)
Total: 55
Elite:
Ammo:
Buildings:
Weapon Storage (Weapons are Here)
Resource Storage (Resources are Here)
Ammo Storage (Ammo is Here)
Barracks (Troops Stay Here)
Base Defences: Fire gate (Burning Iron Wall)
Resources:
200 Iron
Projects:
1. Build Petal Gathering Center - 0/60 days (400 Iron, 200 petals)
2. Gather 25 Aluminum - 0/6 days (FREE)
3. Reaserch Seed Ammunation -/20 days (40 petals)
Log:-
Honestly! Who do these jokers think they are? Pikmin are the dominant species on this planet an I intend to prove it with force!
(I know something iswrong but this headahce is preventing me from knowing what it is exactly)
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Makajawan
Gatling Groink
Supreme Commander Awesome[A:1]
Everything he touches turns to ice, but he warms your heart.
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Post by Makajawan on Oct 25, 2009 15:41:59 GMT -5
You have 25 too many ordinary troops; max is 50. That's all I see, but I don't have quite a lot of time so I can't look too closely.
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Post by PhilTH on Oct 25, 2009 16:06:12 GMT -5
I changed it a litte.
Still I tihnk it's wrong.
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Bread & Butter
Fiery Bulblax
Leader of the Breakfast Battalion[A:0]
He's a lumberjack, and he's okay
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Post by Bread & Butter on Oct 25, 2009 18:15:08 GMT -5
You start with 1,000 Iron so you should have 900 left BUT petal gathering centers cost 400 iron to build, so you should be left with 600.
It only takes 6 days to obtain 25 aluminum. Not 10 for 10.
You need a petal count so somewhere you should have "Petals: 48" however this number is variable to change if you choose to mine more than just 25 aluminum.
You're base can't be in a cave so unless you mean 'Awakening Wood: Near the White Flower Garden' then you'll have to change your location.
I also recommend to have an overall troop total, not required but it's nice to keep things as organized as possible such as totals.
I see that you have empty fields for ammo and your elites. Keep it mind that you will be building machines later in the game and will need to put it in your log as well.
If you fix all of this then I think that you'll be good to go. But I don't have the authority to approve your application so you'll still have to wait around for the appropriate people to come around.
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Post by PhilTH on Oct 25, 2009 18:17:46 GMT -5
Oh hey thanks I knew something was wrong thank ou for looking it over.
V4 I have to get used to the rules AGAIN. -_-
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Bread & Butter
Fiery Bulblax
Leader of the Breakfast Battalion[A:0]
He's a lumberjack, and he's okay
Posts: 733
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Post by Bread & Butter on Oct 25, 2009 20:08:02 GMT -5
Wait, who are you? And you have 600 iron, not 400.
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Post by PhilTH on Oct 25, 2009 20:17:53 GMT -5
Oh me I'm PhilTH from version V3
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Bread & Butter
Fiery Bulblax
Leader of the Breakfast Battalion[A:0]
He's a lumberjack, and he's okay
Posts: 733
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Post by Bread & Butter on Oct 25, 2009 21:18:39 GMT -5
I really can't say I remember you... at all... maybe i wasn't here during v3... i thought I was... oh well.
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Makajawan
Gatling Groink
Supreme Commander Awesome[A:1]
Everything he touches turns to ice, but he warms your heart.
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Post by Makajawan on Oct 25, 2009 21:56:55 GMT -5
Petal Gathering Centers take a 60-day project, 400 resources on the building, and 200 Petals to make. That needs to be changed.
I also see nothing in the rules that says ammo projects don’t take petals. In case you weren’t sure, all projects in this game cost 2 petals to run per day; these petals are paid at the beginning of the project. Resource projects are the only exception because resources can already be gotten with money, so projects are the “poor man’s” way of doing it, hence their lack of cost.
Other than that, I see nothing wrong with it, so APPROVED.
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Post by PhilTH on Oct 27, 2009 10:02:16 GMT -5
SWEET!
Were's my forum? Oo
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Makajawan
Gatling Groink
Supreme Commander Awesome[A:1]
Everything he touches turns to ice, but he warms your heart.
Posts: 813
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Post by Makajawan on Oct 27, 2009 17:53:17 GMT -5
It's there. Sorry.
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