In their Eyes. 2.0 The lives of 5 wild pikmin

[yoshimaster]

Part 1:Red
Chapter one: Birth

My seed formed, and I felt nutrients swarm it. I flew through the air, hit the ground, and felt a surge of strength. The cool ground surged my veins with power. My arms extended, sucking in even more nutrition. My legs stretched out with a tingling sensation. My stem stretched upward and penetrated dirt and AH! I felt the sun filling me with warmth and giving me energy. My surplus of strength flowed into my leaf, turning it into a bud and then a flower. I felt a tug and flew out to the surface, seeing another pikmin who had plucked me. I looked around and saw my tribe. I was ready to embrace my new life as a red.

[layze]

Oct 9, 2008 20:23:26 GMT -5 yoshimaster said:

Disclaimer: in this game pikmin are at the same level of development as native American tribes did when they were discovered.

I stopped reading there.

[yoshimaster]

well then again, not really, No tools really, just they are intellegent.

[yoshimaster]

Part 1: Red
Chapter 2: On the hunt.
I was Immediatly given hunting patrol duty. I and 24 other min left the base to hunt For my Tribe: The reds of the elemental unity Family, Awakning wood clan. You see there are two familys, Elemental unity and Elemantal rage. I belong to the former. Each family has 20 onions (4 red, 4 yellow, 4 blue, 4 purple and 4 white) 1 of each type for each area (Awakning wood, perplexing pool, Vally of repose and Wistful wild.) These groups of onions are called clans, and each onion has a tribe, Led by 5 elders. Anyway, we soon sniffed out a firey blowhog. We jumped on this easy prey, I pounded with my flower inul it fell. Then came a larger, older stronger creature, The blowhogs mate, a really really big watery blowhog! It spid acidic water and we scattered. Some of it grazed my side and it erupted into pain. We gathered into groups of 5 and attacked. My group wend for the left front, and I granbed the spout. I hit it again and again but the blowhog bucked, sending me flying. I hit a tree hard, and force myself up to see another red hit full on by the acidic stream of water. He forced himself up and, his flower shrivling to a bud charge once more. I charged too jumping onto the foes back Slamming down with my flower time and time again. Exastion gripped my limbs as I struggled to hang on to the bucking blowhog. It blew water in the air, and seveal drops stung my body as the sunk in. Finaly It fell to the dirt dead as did my hunting party diminished in number by at least 4 'min and exahsted, we began to carry the food to the onion.

[Hachi]

Interesting story. It's inspiring me to think of some more legends for my Planet Protectors.

[yoshimaster]

I'm Glad you like it. Thanks!

[Meowzer]

Great story. Its interesting how the clans are set up.

[yoshimaster]

Thanks!

Part 1 Red
Chapter 3: ATTACK!

I and another red were on patrol. We watched for enemy attackers. Of course if we find a sheregrub we eat it though. And then I heard it A party of enemy blues heading for the yellow camp! I had my friend run home to let the tribe know. And I went to warn the yellows! I Raced through our teratory and into the yellow tribes camp.

"IT'S AN ATTACK! BLUES! HEADING THIS WAY! I yelled, and all eyes turned to me as the blues burst into the camp!

[Rocky]

kinda cool, but i don't like the fact it portrays the species at a war of races.

[yoshimaster]

I was kinda inspired by Erin hunter's Warriors series.

[Meowzer]

I got a warriors book but still need to read it.