torch light army

[drake]

Hocotatian Army:torch light army
General:goolagz
perplexing pool beach area(neer the land ing site)

Day 1

Troops

600 red pikmin(resistan to fire)
500 cyan pikmin(troops that are good for snow troops)
Total: 1,000

Petals: 100

Ally: None
Peace Treaty: None
Enemies: None

Buildings

1. Weapons Storage (Weapons are stored here.)
2. Ammunitions Storage (Ammunition is stored here.)
3. Resource Storage (Resources are stored here.)
4. Barracks (Troops sleep here.)

Resources

0 Iron (Build strength=3. Weak to extreme fire, decent elsewhere.)

Machines

defenses
earth works

Other Stuff



Projects

1)artillery cannon(2 iron to build fires bomb seeds high into the air to slamb down on enemy territory 19/20 days to make)
2.factory(4 iron takes 39/40 days)
3. seed lancher(2 iron to make lanches seeds 19/20 days to make)

[Hachi]

You made a good start, but there's some things that needs to be fixed.

1. You don't have a factory automatically. You'll need to build it. 40 days for a normal vehicle factory that make tanks and such.

2. Your army doesn't have any machine at first either. They need to be built by factories or doing a project.

3. The Other Stuff's Seed Launcher will need to be researched as well.

4. You can have up to 6 running projects. This is the place you would do thing like set up factories or build things. Be sure to mention how long each project will take.

The rules can be confusing, but I know you'll understand it soon.

[drake]

is this good?

[Hachi]

A little better, but you need to note by your project a description, how long it'll take and how much resources it would cost.

Example
Vehicle Factory: Builds vehicles (40/40 days remaining, uses 4 Iron to build)

For other projects, you'll also need to do the same. Usually, only machines, defenses and factories use up resources. Machine and defenses takes 1-2 resources. All factories takes 4 resources to build and are generally 40 days.

[Rocky]

You don't start out with a factory, and snow pikmin can be called Cyan pikmin. You also don't start out with machines. at all. you have 2 base defenses, which are immobile. Your project slots have to be showing, You need a more precises local, like "Perplexing Pool, By landing site." And you have 8 iron.

[drake]

how about now

[drake]

is it good

[Rocky]

could you be a bit more specific with the mines, O Impetus one? (NOT an insult) And the project slots?

[Hachi]

You'll have to find another area for your army, sorry. The Perplexing Pool landing site is already taken, but a lot of people have accidentally tried to set up base there.

You'll need to put up the length of of all your project, not just the factories. Upgrades for troops, such as that Seed Launchers, usually are between 20-30 days. Base defenses are usually from 20-40 days in length.

About the Iron, you start out with 8. Since you used 4 to build a factory and 2 for the artillery cannon, there are 2 Iron remaining.

[Rocky]

ok, I didn't notice, kronos, sorry for giving him bad advice.

[drake]

now is it good

[Hachi]

It's almost there. There's just a bit more things to fix; a lot of people have had trouble before.

1. Most people use this to signify how long a project takes and the amount of time left. Example - 40 (How many days left) /40 (The total project days).

So, that's why your factory is 40/40. The total time is 40 days and since you just started, there's 40 days left to go.

2. The Seed Launchers and artillery days will need to be fixed.

3. Since the Artillery used 2 Iron and the Factory used up 4 Iron, you only have 2 Iron remaining out of the 8 you started with.

4. The landing site for Perplexing Pool is already taken by another group. You'll have to get another area to set up base.

[Meowzer]

You meed to be a bit more specific with your base. Where is the upper hill area?

[drake]

now is it good?

[Orangutan]

You should have 0 iron, and if you want, you can make a log which shows what happened that day and gives your leader a personality. I think all's fine after that.