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Post by Spotty Fishbear on Jul 23, 2008 21:24:10 GMT -5
Wildlife army: Critter Crew Location: Awakening Wood, where the Bulblax Kingdom is.
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Ordinary Troops: 100 bulbmin (Child bulborbs that are infected by parasitic pikmin. Invulnerability to water, poison, electricity and fire.) 100 shearwig (Sheargrub cousin that has the ability to fly. Can destroy bridges and cheap buildings) 100 dwarf red bulborbs (Breadbug species that tries to avoid predation through mimicry. Can deliver medium-blow bites) 200 male sheargrubs (Can deliver minor-blow bites, and relies on ambush attacks)
Special Troops: 10 Spotty Bulbears (Grub dog species that can patrol a set area) 20 Orange Bulborbs (Grub dog species that lightly sleeps) 20 Careening Dirigibugs (Can drop bomb rocks on enemies to ambush)
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Assets -Resource Storage (Allows resource protection) -Barracks (Where troops sleep) -Ammunition Storage (Allows ammunition storage) -Weapon Storage (Allows weapon protection) -Petal Gathering Center (Gives 15 petals every day)
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Resources 2 Iron 50 Petals ---
Machines (None) ---
Defenses: -White Bone Gate (Cheap protection. Can be taken down in no time) -Electric Fence (Gate with electricity running through it) ---
Projects:
1- Look for Burrowing Snagret (Recruit Burrowing Snagret) (Days: 0/50) 2- Create a dark bone gate near the weights (3 iron, days: 0/10) 3- Get Bitter Berry (Days: 0/20) 4- OFFLINE 5- OFFLINE 6- OFFLINE --- Please tell if anything's wrong...
~Spotty Bulbear
EDIT: I applied Water Dumple's changes, and added a new project. Is that ok?
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Rocky
Giant Breadbug
The Recombinant
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Post by Rocky on Jul 23, 2008 22:16:56 GMT -5
i think that you might have used too much iron in the "dark bone gate" which is actaly made of wood. same as white.
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Kai
Gatling Groink
Yes, I am.
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Post by Kai on Jul 23, 2008 23:08:27 GMT -5
Hmmm....The gates look like they're made of a Spider Web...
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Rocky
Giant Breadbug
The Recombinant
Posts: 1,636
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Post by Rocky on Jul 23, 2008 23:15:49 GMT -5
there suposed to be made of wood.
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Post by Grey Snagret on Jul 23, 2008 23:19:38 GMT -5
They can be made of whatever they want to be made of, he's using iron 'cause it's more durable.
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Post by Water Dumple on Jul 23, 2008 23:55:05 GMT -5
You've done a pretty good job! Just a few things need changing.
-Wildlife armies now start with a Petal Gathering Center. This allows them to get 15 Petals per day. Feel free to add this to your assets area.
-Sorry, but you can't make mines. You have to get them installed from the Universal Store, and they cost a hefty bit of money...just buy resources for now if you want them.
-Is this "Dark Bone Gate" made of Iron? If so, you could just make it solid if you want. You're spending an awful lot of Iron on it (As much as a typical building) so it's going to be extremely well-fortified. Feel free to move that down to 3 Iron spent on it if you wish.
-Before you can make a spray, you need to get a berry first. It takes a 20-day project to get the berry. After that, the 20-day project for the spray works.
-Don't forget to subtract Petals and resources from your counters! For every day a project runs, you have to spend two Petals. And you'll need to take some Iron out if you're spending some on that wall. Wildlife armies start with 5 Iron.
Just make these changes and this army will be approved. You've done quite a nice job, I have a feeling that you'll have a powerful and creative army in the future.
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Post by Spotty Fishbear on Jul 24, 2008 6:58:14 GMT -5
Water Dumple, I made the changes. See the first post.
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Post by norbertk19 on Jul 24, 2008 7:26:21 GMT -5
Approved also must to point this out someone is very close to your base
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Post by THE GODDAMN BATMAN on Jul 24, 2008 8:31:44 GMT -5
your team is pretty balnced, not like mine (defensive) or crystallucario's (offensive)
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Post by Spotty Fishbear on Jul 24, 2008 8:36:15 GMT -5
Thanks for the comment!
Alright, I'll wait for my army's subforum to be created so I can start the game.
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