mew929
Sheargrub
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Post by mew929 on Jul 6, 2008 15:18:11 GMT -5
Wildlife Army: Snarlies Location: Cidedel of Spiders sub level 3 Army
Ordinary 200 Proppelor Dweevils (flying dweevils that blow troops back and have air based attacks.) 200 Frost Dweevils (dweevils that can freeze troops and have ice based attacks) 100 Digger Dweevils ( dweevils that hide under ground and have ground based attacks) Subtotal: 500
Special 25 Gatling Groink (A fish/machine troop that fires mortar shots) 25 Bread Bug (Burrowing hard-to-kill thieves) Subtotal: 50
Super (None)
Grand Total: 550
Petals: 200
Ally: None Peace Treaty: None Wars: None
Assets
1. Weapons Storage (Holds troop weapons.) 2. Ammunitions Storage (Contains ammunition.) 3. Resource Storage (Resources are kept safe here.) 4. Barracks (Where the troops stay.)
Resources
1 Iron (Build strength=3. Weak to extreme fire, decent elsewhere.)
Machines
(None)
Base Defenses
1 Electro-Nodes (Nodes that stick in the ground and are connected by bands of electricity.)
1 Fire Gyser (spits up fire from ground when enemy walks by)
Projects
1. Build an Aerial War Machine Factory: 4 Iron (Automatically makes air-based war machines.) (0/40 Days)
2. Research Bomb Rocks (Allows use of Bomb Rock ammunition.) (0/20 Days)
3. Research Berry-Bombs (Allows use of Berry-Bombs as ammunition.) (0/35 Days)
4. Offline
5. Offline
6. Offline
Log
wassup
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Planet9
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Post by Planet9 on Jul 6, 2008 15:21:01 GMT -5
Any particular reason you have the same log as xaiver?
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mew929
Sheargrub
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Post by mew929 on Jul 6, 2008 15:31:18 GMT -5
No........
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Post by Water Dumple on Jul 6, 2008 17:47:24 GMT -5
Okay, not bad. I wish you hadn't copy/pasted, but I'll grade it for what it is.
First, you don't have to research troop types. Projects 4 and 5 can go for that reason (After you hit 5,000 troops total, you need Recruitment Centers, but that won't be for a while). Second, for every day a project runs when you start the project, you have to pay 2 Petals. So if you get rid of projects 4 and 5, you'll have 10 Petals. After that, this is good. Just make those changes and this will be approved.
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mew929
Sheargrub
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Post by mew929 on Jul 6, 2008 19:43:58 GMT -5
Thank you for telling me those changes were needed ;D
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Post by Water Dumple on Jul 6, 2008 20:11:34 GMT -5
Don't forget to jiggle with your Petal count (It's at 10). Anyways, approved.
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