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Post by lperryman on May 24, 2010 2:23:56 GMT -5
Location: Hill that the dream den is on not in it, on it commander:lance(poison bulborb, purple white dots, immune to poison, immets poison cloud once a day) log:1 day:0
ordinary
black dwarf bulborbs: 550 (black on black, strong atk, average def) gatherer bulborb larva: 100 (+10 iron and aluminum a day, weak def, average atk) brown dwarf bulborb:350 (dig underground, strong def, average atk) flashing sherbug: 100 (flashbang grenade effect, weak all around) balloon dweevil: 500 (carrys anything, weak atk, weak def, hard to hit total: 1600
special
50 heavy bulborbs (slow, strong def, average attack, blue with green dots) 50 scout bulborbs (fast, average def, average atk, camoflauge, green with brown) 30 Dark bulborbs (Can blend into the shadows, strong atk, strong def) 30 brown bulborbs (can dig underground caverns, strong atk, average def) total: 160
buildings
1 barrack 1 resource storage 1 ammo storage 1 weapons storage 1 managment center 3 petal gethering centers Defences
1 gated poison wall 8 mg turrets 2 anti air turrets
projects
bulborb pack ( attach to adult bulborb to transport smaller ones, weak from above, rockets,) (0/20days) -100 iron -20 petals Snipers (0/10 days) -50 iron -10 petals leg boosters (attach to bulborbs legs to improve speed) (0/20 days) -100 iron -20 petals lures ( lure in creatures to usualy obvious traps) (0/50 days) -500 iron -100 petals resources
iron:250 petals:50
log: lance- dude we be screwd
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Post by Sir Pikmin on May 24, 2010 15:12:18 GMT -5
Just a few things wrong with this. If by "Hill that you fight the robot dweevil" you mean the Dream Den than you're going to have to change it. Your base can't be in a cave in this game. If you mean the hill near the cave entrance then that's fine. There's also the resource and ammo been. I think you mean "bin" with those so you might want to change it as some of the mods can get a little upset over grammar.
And then there's the MG, you have way too many days and iron on it, it should probably be around 2 or 3 days if for troops and 1or 2 iron or a little bit more of both for a base defense. As of right now though your mg would be overpowered, maybe even at god mod status. You also either subtracted too many petals from the total or accidentally hit the 1 instead of 2. Other than that everything else is fine. When a mod comes by and sees that you have made some fixes he/she should make you your board, but for now stay patient.
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Post by lperryman on May 24, 2010 15:17:32 GMT -5
Thanks, I'm new and I didn't want to not spend enough, and not in the cave, ON it
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nexus
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Post by nexus on May 24, 2010 15:53:58 GMT -5
You have 3 project slots. And also next to your projects you need to list how many petals it costs and such.
here is what it should look like:
Random Project of Uberness (0/45 Days) - 90 Petals - 30 Iron
Fix the spelling of "ammo been" to "ammo bin"
There is a e in average and in weapon.
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Post by lperryman on May 25, 2010 12:04:05 GMT -5
AM I aproved?
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Post by Sir Pikmin on May 25, 2010 20:01:41 GMT -5
Ok, it looks pretty good now, except I think you still have too much iron put into the mg gun, but it is a lot better than before. Also sadly none of us on right now are mods, so we can't make your board and you're not officially approved. Give it a day or two more and some mod should come by and see this. I
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Post by Sir Pikmin on May 25, 2010 20:07:56 GMT -5
Not yet. Just wait for a little while longer, maybe a day at most, and if a mod doesn't see this by then than we'll contact one of them and get it done. But until then you are going to have to be a little patient and wait for the mods to come.
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Post by lperryman on May 25, 2010 21:26:44 GMT -5
thanks, i thought that i didnt do somthing or they disaproved. btw when i get good we should make a aliance or peace treaty
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Post by Sir Pikmin on May 26, 2010 21:14:46 GMT -5
thanks, i thought that i didnt do somthing or they disaproved. btw when i get good we should make a aliance or peace treaty Yeah, that would be fine if I was still playing. I was away from here for over month and all of the different calculations I would have to do to update my log would take a long time to do. So a peace treaty or alliance is out for this version, maybe the next one though. And here is a little tip when your army is finally approved: Try not to have more than two weeks between updates to your logs. It will take some time and a calculator to update all the troop numbers and project dates and the like.
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Post by lperryman on May 26, 2010 21:25:04 GMT -5
next version it's me and u.
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nexus
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Post by nexus on May 27, 2010 15:22:52 GMT -5
not that hard. I did it for my bro(fierybulbax) after he screwed up and missed a bunch. Just updated in 2 or 3 day increments. That way it is easy to calculate, just find out how many days you missed and catchup.
Oh yeah, when you post the updated logs, on the top just say what days they are for so everyone knows.
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Post by lperryman on May 28, 2010 23:51:08 GMT -5
Still waiting
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Goolix
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Post by Goolix on May 29, 2010 16:04:24 GMT -5
You still need to apply the late start bonus.
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Post by lperryman on May 29, 2010 20:16:39 GMT -5
I don't know when it started
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Goolix
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Post by Goolix on May 29, 2010 22:01:27 GMT -5
It was about four months ago.
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