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Post by wrath on Mar 17, 2010 1:48:18 GMT -5
Army: Robocreature assault Commander: Bolt(RoboGroink) Location: The Fiery Cliff(The cliff in the forest naval with the fire geysers.)
Soldiers
Normal 25 Robomin(Robot Pikmin) 25 Dwarf Roboborbs(Robot Dwarf Bulborbs)
Special 5 Robogroinks(Robot Groinks)
Elites (none)
Resources 700 Iron 240 Petals
War Machines (none)
Upgrades/Resources (none)
Defenses Iron Wall(A wall) (30 days, Iron)
Buildings Ammo Factory(Were ammo is made and stored) Weapons Factory(were weapons are made and stored) Troop Factory(Were troops are made and sleep) Resource Storage(Were resources are stored)
Projects 1. Build a project center [30/30] -60 Petals -300 Iron 2. Gather 25 aluminum [6/6] 3. Gather 25 aluminum [6/6]
Log Bolt: Today we will be starting our glorious Mechanical army!
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nexus
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Post by nexus on Mar 17, 2010 14:11:12 GMT -5
try spacing it, did you copy it of a word file cuz that sometimes messes things up.
It looks ok but It is hard to read so make sure you edit it and space it(for help look at other peoples applications)
Also I am not a mod so dont ask me to approve it and don't think this is an approval(just covering my back with that one)
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Post by Lord Raymond on Mar 17, 2010 17:11:20 GMT -5
definitely not approved. Copy someone elses template and just edit in your own details.
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Post by lovethepikmin on Mar 17, 2010 18:31:06 GMT -5
Ummm hopefuly this isn't a joke and will change in no more than 48 hours.
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nexus
Swooping Snitchbug
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Post by nexus on Mar 17, 2010 19:42:14 GMT -5
I think it was just some serious spacing errors cuz it looks like everything is in there that needs to be.
Just not the spaces and section titles
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Post by Infinity ∞ on Mar 17, 2010 20:00:19 GMT -5
Aside from the obvious issues with spacing, if the Fiery Bublax you're taming is an elite, it would help if you named it something else so it doesn't have the same name as the special troops. You also need a total number of troops you have. You have 370 iron left. You need a commander (just a stronger-than-normal guy that leads your army) and a log. And not completely necessary, but you should use Spell Check for all those words you misspelled. Also, for those Bomb-rock launchers, keep in mind you need to research bomb-rocks before you can use them.
I'm hoping this is someone who made their app from scratch and not a joke.
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Post by Lord Raymond on Mar 17, 2010 20:14:38 GMT -5
its at least...readable now (couresy of me), but he still has to fix everything by himself. There's also something wrong with the formatting on that text.
EDIT: also, this person either doesn't care or is like 7 years old, they misspelled special, pikmin,and resources, among other things.
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