Hachi
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Post by Hachi on Oct 3, 2008 22:19:01 GMT -5
Well, I was hoping for your log to somewhat look like this. Your way isn't wrong, but it's not as organized.
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Hocotatian Army Name: Replay's Army General: Replay Distant Spring: A low base cliff, with bamboo shoots so pikmin reinforcments come in but larger enemies can't.)
Day 0
Troops 500 Red pikmin (Some description here) 100 Yellow Pikmin 100 Blue Pikmin 150 White Pikmin 100 Purple Pikmin 50 Bulbmin
Total: 1,000
Petals: 100
Ally: None Peace Treaty: None Enemies: None
Buildings
1. Weapons Storage (Weapons are stored here.) 2. Ammunitions Storage (Ammunition is stored here.) 3. Resource Storage (Resources are stored here.) 4. Barracks (Troops sleep here.)
Resources
8 Iron (Build strength=3. Weak to extreme fire, decent elsewhere.)
Machines
(None)
Defenses
Bamboo Sprouts
Other Stuff
(None)
Projects
1) Build 1 Foxholes (8/8 days) The days need to be exact. 2) Build 1 Foxholes (8/8 days) 3) 4) 5) 6)
Log Replay: I've just arrived to this planet.
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Post by Water Dumple on Oct 3, 2008 23:18:51 GMT -5
Because your application is still seriously lacking...
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replayty13
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If you jumped into a lava pit, would your pikmin follow? Probably.
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Post by replayty13 on Oct 4, 2008 1:08:58 GMT -5
thank you, Let me polish it again.
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replayty13
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Post by replayty13 on Oct 4, 2008 14:43:03 GMT -5
Here's my new version
Hocotatian Army: S.S. Seagull General: Replay Distant Spring, Low Base Cliff. Day 0
Troops 500 Red Pikmin 150 Blue Pikmin 150 Yellow Pikmin 75 White Pikmin 75 Purple Pikmin 50 Bulbmin Petals: 100
Ally: None Peace Treaty: None Enemies: None
Buildings
1. Weapons Storage (Weapons) 2. Ammunitions Storage (Ammunition) 3. Resource Storage (Resources) 4. Barracks (Troops)
Resources
8 Iron
Machines
(None)
Defenses
Bamboo Sprouts (so larger enemies cant come in)
Other Stuff
(None)
Projects
1)Build foxhole (defense +2)(0/5 days) 2)Build Foxhole (0/5 days) 3)Build Foxhole (0/5 days) 4) 5) 6)
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Post by tinfoilman on Oct 4, 2008 15:30:58 GMT -5
BINGO! Ho-ho-ho-ho!
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replayty13
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Post by replayty13 on Oct 4, 2008 22:16:45 GMT -5
I get pushed forward often, so it helps a little to me here
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replayty13
Sheargrub
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Post by replayty13 on Oct 5, 2008 17:07:45 GMT -5
Do you need anything else?
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Hachi
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Post by Hachi on Oct 5, 2008 17:12:11 GMT -5
Well, under resources, you'll still have 8 Iron. That's how much you start out with. Also, separate the 3 Foxhole into 3 separate projects. And, beside those two thing, everything looks right.
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replayty13
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Post by replayty13 on Oct 5, 2008 17:16:22 GMT -5
Edit #5 done ;D
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Hachi
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Post by Hachi on Oct 5, 2008 17:17:20 GMT -5
Much better. I'll have your board set up then.
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replayty13
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Post by replayty13 on Oct 5, 2008 17:22:09 GMT -5
thanks. I appreciate it.
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