Fang
Careening Dirigibug
The Dude
I don't even know ?\(?_o)/?
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Post by Fang on Jul 5, 2008 21:37:53 GMT -5
Wildlife Army: Dream Defenders Location:Wistful Wilds: Dream den area Army
Ordinary 100 White pikmin (pikmin with red eyes. resistant to poison and poisonous if eaten) 200 Bulbmin (Dwarf bulborbs infected with pikmin. Resistant to all elements.) 200 pikmin (yellow) ( Yellow pikmin with big ears witch can make them fly high. Can pick up bomb rocks also.)
Subtotal: 500
Special 50 Breadbugs (tunneling, hard-to-kill thieves that can drag ordinary units down.)
Subtotal: 50
Super (None)
Grand Total: 550
Petals: 90
Ally: None Peace Treaty: None Wars: None
Assets
1. Weapons Storage (Holds troop weapons.) 2. Ammunitions Storage (Contains ammunition.) 3. Resource Storage (Resources are kept safe here.) 4. Barracks (Where the troops stay.)
Resources
3 Iron (Build strength=3. Weak to extreme fire, decent elsewhere.)
Machines
(None)
Base Defenses
2 Pitfalls(Large holes covered with leaves)
Projects
1. Build Cannon (2 iron) (A small turret to launch 1 bomb rock at a time with normal defense.) (35/35 days)
2. Research Bomb Rocks (Allows use of Bomb Rock ammunition.) (20/20 Days)
Log
*Blank*
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Post by Water Dumple on Jul 5, 2008 23:02:52 GMT -5
Alright, you've got the correct general idea. However, PKmin basically use magic which goes outside the rules. Please replace them with another type. Also, for projects, you need to say how many resources you're using per project. And unless that Cannon is the most heavily armored box with a gun barrel sticking out of it in the universe, it's not going to use four Iron to make! It'll probably only use one. And a quick description of what the cannon does would be nice. And, lastly, you can only start with 2 defenses, so please only start with 2 Pitfalls. Oh, and your Petal count is messed up. Just change those things and this'll be approved.
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Fang
Careening Dirigibug
The Dude
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Post by Fang on Jul 6, 2008 12:05:56 GMT -5
I changed it.
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Post by Water Dumple on Jul 6, 2008 13:05:01 GMT -5
You've got 90 Petals instead of 100, but otherwise this is approved.
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